Friday, May 13, 2011

crowded subway train {series} - haiku/senryu

crowded subway train
everybody's thoughts

loud as silence




crowded subway train

Che Guevara T-shirt

above Armani jeans




crowded subway train

in someones shopping bag

a can of sardines




crowded subway train

people playing chicken

with each-others gaze




crowded subway train

next stop

high heels




crowded subway train

enough fashion statements

to blow your mind




crowded subway train

the meaningful use of soap

eludes some people



© Costis Demos

4 comments:

  1. Love these! Of course the top one is my favorite. In the silence everyone's thoughts are loud. (Hugs)Indigo

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  2. I agree with Indigo - I like the first one best, but the whole series is really observant - conjures up some vivid images. // Peter.

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  3. nice series. that first one sticks out as the best.

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